Talk:Digital Marketing

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Hello! I think your post was great but based on what was said in the discussion, this post should be more like an encyclopedia piece in which everything is backed up with a source. That said, I think that the first paragraph could be condensed to just explaining what digital marketing is, rather than trying to introduce the topic like you would in normal essay writing. Also, for the three other headings, you could make one main one titled "Ethical Implications" or "Ethical Concerns" and have the three examples as subheadings. Then, removing the conclusion and adding more to the ethical sections would make the post stronger. I think adding real-life instances of digital marketing companies violating privacy or statistical data on the impact COVID had on online shopping/digital marketing would be interesting! - Erika Kohl