Talk:Caroline Tuohy

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Comments from Brant Verlinde

Hi Caroline! I found it super interesting to hear about another Michigan resident finding their full voter record information available on the internet, as I had the same discovery during my time researching for the assignment. Your data identity article is very well planned out and formatted, I found the categorizations you used to break down the whole online identity to be intuitive and fully encompassing. It's interesting that the Touhys from the Blindside didn't show up at all too. If I had to suggest an improvement, I think it would be interesting for you to dive into the sources of the personal information that came up. Adding more information about the websites that post that information would be very interesting, especially as someone who experienced the same thing. Great job! -Brant Verlinde

Comments from Sabina Anand

Hey Caroline -- I really enjoyed reading your piece and I related to a lot of it; my online identity was also "accurate" but not necessarily an embodiment of who I am at large. I also related to your sentiment that although the hidden components of your online identity are not things you want to hide, you still enjoy the fact that they're private. I think it could be interesting to dive a little deeper into how we determine what information about us we feel comfortable being online, compared to which features of our life we would prefer to stay private. I enjoyed the logical flow/breakdown of your piece as well. Overall, great job!