User contributions
- 01:36, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+321) . . N Talk:Violence and video games (Created page with "== Drew == This is a good start. You did quite a bit of research, but make sure you are writing in a neutral tone and including all of the required elements of the assignment:...") (current)
- 01:21, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+285) . . N Talk:Informational Friction (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and neutral tone. Would like to see stronger relationship to supporting evidence and a wider range of sources in order to strengthen your exploration...") (current)
- 01:19, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+319) . . N Talk:Rape In Cyberspace (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and use of neutral tone. You have good sources but some parts of your article are not well-supported. Illustrations may help convey complex concepts...") (current)
- 01:15, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+223) . . N Talk:Confidentiality of Online Data (Created page with "== Drew == Great use of formatting and neutral tone to write about your topic. You have good sources, but not all of your article is well-supported. Make sure you are able to...") (current)
- 01:12, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+255) . . N Talk:Digital divide (Created page with "== Drew == Good start on formatting and quality of references, but needs a stronger explanation of what the digital divide is and the ethical issues that arise from it. There...") (current)
- 01:09, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+375) . . N Talk:Freedom of Information policies (Created page with "== Drew == Good start on formatting and neutral tone. Look at how you can find some additional supporting evidence from diverse sources. Your ethics section has a good start,...") (current)
- 01:06, 22 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+421) . . Talk:Fake News
- 21:47, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+271) . . N Talk:Plagiarism (Created page with "== Drew == Good research and writing! Be careful with unsupported claims and hyperbole (e.g. plagiarism as as rampant as ever...). Good start on ethical topics. Explore academ...") (current)
- 21:45, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+476) . . N Talk:Manhunt (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and use of neutral writing. Good start on sources, but try to include some citations around your game synopsis and mechanics. Make sure you're using...") (current)
- 21:42, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+292) . . N Talk:Iris Recognition (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and writing your concepts in a neutral tone. You do a good job citing your sources but some opinions/unsupported facts creep up at the very end. Good...") (current)
- 14:19, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+387) . . N Talk:Public Morality (Created page with "== Drew == Great use of formatting and sources in order to create a strong article. Try to focus on separating the definition of what public morality is versus how it appears...") (current)
- 14:16, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+269) . . N Talk:Bitcoins (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and start to neutral writing. Try to see if you can differentiate bitcoins from cryptocurrency as a whole, what makes this area unique? Silkroad exam...") (current)
- 14:14, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+417) . . N Talk:Misinformation (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and writing that keeps the focus on misinformation while acknowledging the relationship with other similar topics. Would like to see a little more in...") (current)
- 14:09, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+538) . . N Talk:Webcams (Created page with "== Drew == Good start on your research and writing of your article. Needs some more content regarding webcams as a whole outside of the ethical issues. Your popular culture se...") (current)
- 14:03, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+400) . . N Talk:Parasocial Relationship (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and start on writing your article. Make sure you're writing in a consistent tone (e.g use of "we" in the ethics section, who is "we"?). "Good" and "B...") (current)
- 14:00, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+401) . . Talk:Utilitarian Philosophy
- 13:56, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+384) . . Talk:Infosphere (current)
- 13:52, 21 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+364) . . N Talk:Device implant (Created page with "== Drew == Good start on research and relating to class concepts. Formatting your article with more subheadings/bullets might help make the info more digestable for readers. S...") (current)
- 00:55, 19 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+272) . . N Talk:Censorship in China (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and start on writing in neutral voice. You bring up some good points, but need to add a bit more to your claims, particularly in your ethics section....") (current)
- 00:51, 19 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+454) . . N Talk:Digital Property (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and use of references in your writing. Good start on neutral writing, you may want to review featured wikipedia articles to identity how you might im...") (current)
- 00:46, 19 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+276) . . N Talk:Right to be Forgotten (Created page with "== Drew == Great research and use of references in your writing. A good start on neutral tone, try looking at featured wikipedia pages in order to get a feel for you might rev...") (current)
- 00:41, 19 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+11) . . Talk:Content moderation (current)
- 00:40, 19 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+348) . . N Talk:Content moderation (Created page with "Great draft! Good use of research and sources in order to help support your findings. I would have liked to see you attempt to explore your ethical issues, however your topics...")
- 19:37, 17 March 2019 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . Topics
- 04:23, 21 February 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+630) . . N Talk:Jiangqiong(Joan) Liu (Created page with "== Drew Asselin == Great work on this assignment. Your write up was well-formatted and it's clear you did your research. I really appreciated how insightful your final paragra...")
- 18:15, 13 February 2019 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . N File:Drew-profile.JPG (current)
- 18:12, 13 February 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+28) . . N File:Drew-cat-toku.JPG (a picture of drew's cat toku) (current)
- 18:11, 13 February 2019 (diff | hist) . . (+29) . . N File:Drew-cat-tora.JPG (a picture of drew's cat, tora) (current)
